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General Studies Answer Writing Group

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Mohit Shukla
Best Answer Award

Answer shared by anonymous aspirant.

Prerna Thakur
Mohit Shukla
Nidhi Sharma
Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mar 03

Based upon the answer you have written, I wish to make following observations:

  1. Your answer is really good. Introduction part of your answer is perfect. you have correctly defined the topic and added a fact which is a good practice. Keep following this practice.

  2. Body of the answer is complete in itself since you have added diverse points in the body part of the question from sending troops, establishment of Training Centre, supplying aid along with example of the role played by India as a mediator in various conflict areas like Africa, Korean War, Middle East. This is commendable

  3. You have left no scope for the examiner to deduct the marks.

Overall it is a good attempt, answer is legible, well presented with proper gap between the points. You have used underline tool really well since you have underlined important points only which would leave a good impression on the examiner.

Focus on the points i have mentioned above and keep writing the answers.

Do well. Best wishes!

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