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Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mar 06

Hello Nidhi. Based upon the answer (Role of ecotourism in sustainable development of HP) you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. Introduction part of your answer is really good. You have defined the topic asked in the question perfectly with a mention about Ecotourism Policy of HP formulated in direction of Sustainable development. (P.S. Your introduction part in all the answers has been really good)

  2. Diversity in points can be seen in body part of your answer. You have covered Conservation, Employment, culture heritage, economic development of the state, promotion of GI and other local products of economic importance, which is good. Facts are missing in this part, for e.g. contribution of tourism to GDP (7%), employment directly and indirectly (14%), reduce social and economic disparities further prevent sub-regional tendencies, channelization of energy of youth through start-ups in ecotourism would further prevent development of anti social elements(drug abuse. cultural conflicts), Cultural exchange and transmission part is missing. This could have made your answer more effective and attractive to the examiner.

Conclusion part is decent.


Overall it is a good attempt, answer is legible, well presented with proper gap between the points. You have used underline tool really well since you have underlined important points only which would leave a good impression on the examiner.

Focus on the points i have mentioned above and keep writing the answers.

Do well. Best wishes!



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