Hello Nidhi. Based upon the answer you have written, I wish to make following observations:-
Introduction part of your answer is really good. You have defined the topic asked in the question along with a fact i.e. PMs vision of Energy Atmanirbharta (P.S. Your introduction part in all the answers has been really good)
Body of the answer is good. You have tried to touch diverse points related to renewable energy sources, environmental impact and being atmanirbhar. However, you have missed diversification of energy resources, international cooperation to meet energy needs, knowledge and technology exchange, collaboration in energy exploration, spending on R&D etc..
Conclusion part is good. Keep following the practice.
Overall it is a good attempt, answer is legible and well presented.
Focus on the points i have mentioned above and keep writing the answers.
Do well. Best wishes!
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Hello Nidhi. Based upon the answer you have written, I wish to make following observations:-
Introduction part of your answer is really good. You have defined the topic asked in the question along with a fact i.e. PMs vision of Energy Atmanirbharta (P.S. Your introduction part in all the answers has been really good)
Body of the answer is good. You have tried to touch diverse points related to renewable energy sources, environmental impact and being atmanirbhar. However, you have missed diversification of energy resources, international cooperation to meet energy needs, knowledge and technology exchange, collaboration in energy exploration, spending on R&D etc..
Conclusion part is good. Keep following the practice.
Overall it is a good attempt, answer is legible and well presented.
Focus on the points i have mentioned above and keep writing the answers.
Do well. Best wishes!