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Mohit Shukla
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Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Feb 28

Hello Nidhi. Based upon the answer you have written, I wish to make following observations:

  1. You have skipped the words in between in introduction part for e.g. instead of writing population of tribals in Himachal Pradesh, you have written population of Himachal Pradesh which changes the sense/essence of the answer. Keep this in mind since once word can change the sense and context. Leaving this aside, your introduction is good. You have quoted facts and example.

  2. Body of the answer is really good since you have covered all the aspects and used examples where ever possible. It is pertinent to mention here that you should stick to the word limit mentioned in the question else you would waste your time in the exam and would not be able to complete the paper. You could directly write the point along with an example or fact. That would suffice.

  3. Since it is a 4 marks question, conclusion is not required, you should directly address the theme asked in the question. Remember word limit and time constraint both will play an important role in the examination.

Overall it is a good attempt, answer is legible, well presented with proper gap between the points. Moreover, use of blue and black pen in the answer is good practice.

Focus on the points i have mentioned above and keep writing the answers.

Do well. Best wishes!

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