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SOCIOLOGY OPTIONAL ANSWER WRITING PRACTICE

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Mohit Shukla
Best Answer Award

Question 9> Explain the process of continuity and change in Indian Society? (HPAS 2014, Sociology Paper -2)

Nidhi Sharma

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Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
4月18日

Hello.. Based upon the answer (Promotional tourism themes) you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. Introduction part is decent. You have covered the basis behind 5 year plans aptly.

  2. Body part of the question is good. You have touched diverse areas aptly with examples whereever possible.. However you have missed LPG reforms an important policy initiative, democratic decentralization through 73rd and 74th amendment act, Nuclear Policy measures, Industrial Policy measures, Foreign Policy measures i.e. bilateral groupings, multilateral grouping, population policy etc. as a part of strategic measures and policy initiatives shaping India's socio-economic objectives. This could have fetched you extra marks. One tip for you is whenever you draw a flowchart or diagram in the answer, leave some space at the last so that you can update few points later on to avoid congestion in the chart.

  3. Conclusion part is good.

There has been tremendous improvement in your answer writing skills.

Keep Practicing!

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Mohit Shukla
Best Answer Award

Question 8> What strategic measures and policy initiatives were included in the Five Year Plan in India that played an important role in shaping the social development scenario of India? (HPAS 2023, Sociology Paper -2)

Nidhi Sharma

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Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
3月31日

Hello.. Based upon the answer you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. Sociological Perspective is missing in your answer. You should have covered few points about Social Change and related changes in the society and how it is achieved and what is the role of Panchayati Raj in achieving it.

  2. Instead of using terms like Panchayati Raj bring lot of changes, try to use "Panchayati Raj has brought positive changes or Panchayati Raj has brought various socio-economic changes etc. Your word selection is important.

  3. You have used a diagram which is a good practice. You could have made your answer diverse by adding more points like infrastructure development, economic empowerment, social empowerment, political empowerment, educational empowerment by quoting various facts.

  4. Conclusion part is decent. Always remember in sociology paper, examiner wants you to cover sociological angle in the answer else your answer would be just like any other GS answer and you would not be able to fetch more marks.

            You write good answers and always aptly describe the theme asked in the question. Your answer writing skills are really good and needs little improvement to fetch good marks.


Focus on the points i have mentioned above and keep writing the answers.

Do well. Best wishes!

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