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SOCIOLOGY OPTIONAL ANSWER WRITING PRACTICE

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Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
31. März

Hello.. Based upon the answer you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. Sociological Perspective is missing in your answer. You should have covered few points about Social Change and related changes in the society and how it is achieved and what is the role of Panchayati Raj in achieving it.

  2. Instead of using terms like Panchayati Raj bring lot of changes, try to use "Panchayati Raj has brought positive changes or Panchayati Raj has brought various socio-economic changes etc. Your word selection is important.

  3. You have used a diagram which is a good practice. You could have made your answer diverse by adding more points like infrastructure development, economic empowerment, social empowerment, political empowerment, educational empowerment by quoting various facts.

  4. Conclusion part is decent. Always remember in sociology paper, examiner wants you to cover sociological angle in the answer else your answer would be just like any other GS answer and you would not be able to fetch more marks.

            You write good answers and always aptly describe the theme asked in the question. Your answer writing skills are really good and needs little improvement to fetch good marks.


Focus on the points i have mentioned above and keep writing the answers.

Do well. Best wishes!

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