Answer Writing Practice

Hello Nidhi g.. based upon the answer you have published, i wish to make following observations:

1. Introduction is good, you have started with a quote and further augmented it with a fact i.e. Census data. That is a good practice. Keep following it.

2. Body of the answer is good but needs improvement. I would suggest that do categorize the problems of tribals into different categories i.e. Social, Political, Economic, Health, Education and further add the problems into relevant section. for eg Poverty and Exploitation can be categorized under Social peoblems; Illiteracy under Educational problems; indebtedness under economic problems and so on. Further categorize the steps taken by the Government in the same way. Try to use flowcharts, graphs if possible to make your answer look attractive and different from others.

3. You have missed facts in the body of your answer. Try to supplement your answer with facts for e.g. Literacy level of tribals, performance in health indicators, data on employment status of tribals etc. Try to quote facts from recent UN reports, government data, NGO studies.

4. Try to work on conclusion part. Conclusion should be positive and should leave an impression on the examiner. Further there is no need to mention 'conclusion' in the answer. Just give proper gap after body to make it self-explanatory to the examiner.

Overall, you have written a good answer. Answer is presented really well ans is legible. There is proper gap between points. Focus on the points i have mentioned above and keep writing the answers. I shall be sharing more questions in due course of time.

Do well. Best wishes!

thank u so much sir 🙏🏻