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Ques 11> Describe the electoral reforms required for smooth functioning of Indian Democracy. (Word Limit: 400 words, HPAS 2020 GS-II)

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Question 9> Explain the process of continuity and change in Indian Society? (HPAS 2014, Sociology Paper -2)

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Mohit Shukla
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Mohit Shukla
Apr 18

Hello.. Based upon the answer (Promotional tourism themes) you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. Introduction part is decent. You have covered the basis behind 5 year plans aptly.

  2. Body part of the question is good. You have touched diverse areas aptly with examples whereever possible.. However you have missed LPG reforms an important policy initiative, democratic decentralization through 73rd and 74th amendment act, Nuclear Policy measures, Industrial Policy measures, Foreign Policy measures i.e. bilateral groupings, multilateral grouping, population policy etc. as a part of strategic measures and policy initiatives shaping India's socio-economic objectives. This could have fetched you extra marks. One tip for you is whenever you draw a flowchart or diagram in the answer, leave some space at the last so that you can update few points later on to avoid congestion in the chart.

  3. Conclusion part is good.

There has been tremendous improvement in your answer writing skills.

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Mohit Shukla
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Mohit Shukla
Apr 18

Hello.. Based upon the answer (Promotional tourism themes) you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. Introduction part is good.

  2. You have gone out of context in body of the answer. The examiner has asked you about the problem of boundaries between India and China instead of disputes. You could have mentioned about boundary issues in western and eastern part along with Johnson and Mcmahon line and how each country acknowledges it. The disputes could be included as examples to make your answer better and fetch more marks.

  3. Conclusion part seems out of context.

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Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Apr 18

Hello.. Based upon the answer (Promotional tourism themes) you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. You have covered upper (old) himachal and lower (new) himachal's cultural disparities. However you have missed reason behind the same. Both areas have different geographical, Infrastructual, educational needs based upon the geographical location and historical factors which the political leaders have been exploiting to fulfil their political objectives. Since this is an important question from mains point of view so prepare it well.

  2. The disparity in social and economic development has further led to sub-regional tendencies and further division and demand for autonomy by some ares e.g. Palampur, Dehra etc

Overall, you have shown a good improvement, answer is legible, well presented and underline tool is used effectively.


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Question 8> What strategic measures and policy initiatives were included in the Five Year Plan in India that played an important role in shaping the social development scenario of India? (HPAS 2023, Sociology Paper -2)

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Ques 10> Discuss in detail about the problem of boundaries between India and China (8 marks, Word Limit: 120 words, HPAS 2023 GS-II)

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Ques 9> Discuss how cultural divide has affected the politics of Himachal Pradesh (4 marks, Word Limit: 60 words, HPAS 2023 GS-II)

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Mohit Shukla
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Mohit Shukla
Apr 02

Hello.. Based upon the answer (Promotional tourism themes) you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. Since it is a 4 marks question, try to stick to the word limit

  2. You have covered all the themes which shows your understanding about the topic.

  3. Chart could also have been used here instead of writing points.

Overall it is a good answer.

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