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Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Apr 18

Hello.. Based upon the answer (Promotional tourism themes) you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. Introduction part is good.

  2. You have gone out of context in body of the answer. The examiner has asked you about the problem of boundaries between India and China instead of disputes. You could have mentioned about boundary issues in western and eastern part along with Johnson and Mcmahon line and how each country acknowledges it. The disputes could be included as examples to make your answer better and fetch more marks.

  3. Conclusion part seems out of context.

Keep Practicing!

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