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Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Mohit Shukla
Apr 18

Hello.. Based upon the answer (Promotional tourism themes) you have written, I wish to make following observations:-

  1. You have covered upper (old) himachal and lower (new) himachal's cultural disparities. However you have missed reason behind the same. Both areas have different geographical, Infrastructual, educational needs based upon the geographical location and historical factors which the political leaders have been exploiting to fulfil their political objectives. Since this is an important question from mains point of view so prepare it well.

  2. The disparity in social and economic development has further led to sub-regional tendencies and further division and demand for autonomy by some ares e.g. Palampur, Dehra etc

Overall, you have shown a good improvement, answer is legible, well presented and underline tool is used effectively.


Keep Practicing.


Do well

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